Tidal Forces

As soon as I touched the blue
It comforted me as she once did 
Her light being the most beautiful hue
Pulling me in like a vortex
Putting life into context
As I dive down into darkness
Hiding from the world in loneliness
I'm compelled to touch the blue
To experience her hue
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January 29, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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