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ticking off

past breaking point wound up to the limit ~ the hour hand passed a minute

said the second hand to the pendulum ~ who snapped, it’s spring time innit

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David Kavanagh

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Gary Radice

May 1, 2024 at 8:04 AM

Nice one. I personally haven't a clue what time it is and haven't had a clue since last October when I sent all my clocks back. Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh

May 2, 2024 at 6:19 AM

Ha I know only too well what you mean Gary, I’m not even sure what day it is sometimes, thanks so much, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

April 15, 2024 at 5:25 AM

Wish they'd leave the damn things alone forward back grrr. Remember once a few years ago we were in Turkey and had time to spare or so we thought. They'd gone forward, one mad dash to the airport lol. Greetings from Crete. Tom

David Kavanagh

April 15, 2024 at 5:51 AM

Good man Tom, you’re definitely in the right place at the right time, pretty cold wet and windy here, yeah hour going forward is a real nuisance, and messed with the body clock, hope/know you’re enjoying the sun, cheers David

I Am Anaya

April 14, 2024 at 2:31 PM

I've heard of idgit, ha. Had to look it up, it is! Timekeeper rocks quietly is that what ticks? Someone is eager for Spring! Cleverly spoken, Cheers!

David Kavanagh

April 15, 2024 at 4:19 AM

Spring forward on the clock Anaya, it cracks me up every year lol! Yeah innit is good old English colloquialism for (isn’t it), I need to get more inspired for writing, on a bit of a lull at the moment, cheers David