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ticking off

past breaking point wound up to the limit ~ the hour hand passed a minute said the second hand to the pendulum ~ who snapped, it’s spring time innit By David Kavanagh

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/15/2024 5:25:00 AM

Wish they'd leave the damn things alone forward back grrr. Remember once a few years ago we were in Turkey and had time to spare or so we thought. They'd gone forward, one mad dash to the airport lol. Greetings from Crete. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/15/2024 5:51:00 AM

Good man Tom, you’re definitely in the right place at the right time, pretty cold wet and windy here, yeah hour going forward is a real nuisance, and messed with the body clock, hope/know you’re enjoying the sun, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/14/2024 2:31:00 PM

I've heard of idgit, ha. Had to look it up, it is! Timekeeper rocks quietly is that what ticks? Someone is eager for Spring! Cleverly spoken, Cheers!

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/15/2024 4:19:00 AM

Spring forward on the clock Anaya, it cracks me up every year lol! Yeah innit is good old English colloquialism for (isn’t it), I need to get more inspired for writing, on a bit of a lull at the moment, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/12/2024 12:52:00 PM

Quite a fun monoku.

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/12/2024 1:17:00 PM

DST messing with the clock, and my mind, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2024 12:14:00 PM

- Great one, David :) - Have a lovely weekend ... enjoy every minute :) - hugs

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/12/2024 12:30:00 PM

Heya Anne Lise, just a few thoughts on daylight saving time, it’s enough to crack anyone up, even the clock! Enjoy the weekend cheers David