Ticket Man is Obsolete

Time to open up your world
let them jump right into the mix 
taste the vast mind pool of your existence
no need for a ticket tearing man
worthy journeys commence for free.

Though impossible-have no prejudice
everyone's invited into your destiny
some will yearn to stay
some will beg to leave
show them nothing 
or show them everything
take some chances to be truly free. 

Time to open up your world
shower them with your spirit-shine
parch them in your darknesses
let them sip your vintage wine
some will pray to stay 
some will say goodbye
time to open up your world
let them jump into the heart 
of your gilded shine. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/19/2024 12:21:00 PM
Dear Anthony, this is such a deep and meaningful poem that encourages us all to be open and to go with the flow and trust the process, it somehow has a very philosophical touch to it and i love the way Youv especially written “ some will want to stay some will want to leave show them nothing or show them everything we must take chances to be free. “ couldnt have said it any better! So much wisdom flowing throughout in such a seamless manner! Absolute pleasure reading this, sending you light
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 10/20/2024 8:07:00 AM
Hi I. Empress, Thank you for your kind comment. Best wishes Anthony
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