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Tick Tock , Tick Tock

Tick tock…tick tock tick tock goes the clock With each stroke of its hand robbing me of youth and vigor scarring the skin, discoloring the hair and causing me suddenly to wither. Just when I’m getting my bearings in this immense place called life Navigating somewhat smoothly and appreciating the preciousness of a moment it defaces me with its every strike Withering away on the outside while being renewed within is the cruelest blight I believe that has been cast upon each and every human Alas! Alas!...tick tock...tick tock tick tock....goes the clock By: JoanMarie Peranteau August 2013

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Date: 1/3/2015 6:38:00 AM
A Marvelous and Meaningful poem JoanMarie---I will return to read more of your work
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Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 1/11/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Jerry.
Date: 8/31/2013 3:06:00 PM
- woow... this is well done Joan !! - Like it!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 1/11/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Anne.
Date: 8/31/2013 11:55:00 AM
Hi JoanMarie, Well crafted write concerning the passage of time..Perhaps it's how we structure our given time.. Regards, Ken
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Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 1/11/2015 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Ken.

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