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Tick Tock

Tick tock, tick tock, the sound of the clock
A constant reminder that time never stops
There must be something that can be done
To slow down the time, how quickly it runs
From seconds to minutes to hours then days
Calendars form an unsolvable maze

Tick tock tick tock,  I'm taking stock
How much is wasted, how much is forgot
I must contribute before it's too late
Do something beneficial and not hesitate
So much can be done in so little time
But I must get moving, hands starting to climb

Tick tock tick tock, There's no roadblock
I can't slow the time by watching the clock
I twiddle my thumbs and constantly *****
Waiting for others to flip their switch
Then criticize them without lending a hand
Sleepwalking in daylight just shuffling the sand

Tick tock tick tock tick tock tick tock...

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/24/2016 8:41:00 AM

Daniel, this poem is very skillfully-written. Also, it hit me right between the eyes! I've just added it to my favorites. Janice

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/24/2016 9:33:00 AM

Oh thank you, Janice. Words so kind and flattering, I am truly honored. Sadly, I think if you can relate then you are like me and in the majority. It's so easy to criticize and do nothing. I really do appreciate you spending your valuable time to read and your comments are always endearing. Peace and be blessed:)

Jean Murray

Date: 2/23/2016 7:02:00 PM

I think it's an upbeat kick in the ass poem. Get up. Get out. Get going. Love it.

Jean Murray
Date: 2/23/2016 7:10:00 PM

But I can't.

Jean Murray
Date: 2/23/2016 7:09:00 PM

But can you dance?? I'm sitting here trying to keep still to Michael Jackson's The Way You Make Me feel.....

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/23/2016 7:06:00 PM

Thank you Jean. I like it too. Not a favorite of everybody else though. I guess they're like me, would rather bitch about somebody else not doing anything. I do love your energy and sense of humor. I'll bet we could really have a good time, as I love to tell dirty jokes and laugh.

Trash Boat

Date: 2/23/2016 8:40:00 AM

You should go on a chicken diet! It helps your gain weight and lose weight in your mind. it helps control your carbs. Don't eat grass, eat more CHICKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/23/2016 8:47:00 AM

Sir, I haven't the slightest idea what you're talking about or even who you are talking to. I could very easily take this as an insult but I'll give you the benefit of a doubt. Thank you for stopping by. We are each entitled to our own opinion by no need to get nasty!

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 2/23/2016 7:38:00 AM

I think much time is wasted thinking about doing, before taking that first step. Appreciating this well written piece more than you know.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/23/2016 7:43:00 AM

I agree. I think if one just gets up and gets started, they can work out the details while they are busy. Thank you so much for understanding the meaning and I also appreciate your time, visit and support. Have a blessed day young lady and Peace:)

Lin Lane

Date: 2/23/2016 4:05:00 AM

Time moves much too quickly. Take a look at The Death of Grandfather Clock, Danny. One of my early posts. You'll see that I know exactly what you mean.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/23/2016 6:02:00 AM

Will do, Lin. Thank you for pointing me in that direction.