Alexis Y. Poet Rhyme

Tick Tock

Tick Tock,

I long for your loving touch,

Tick Tock,

I miss you so much.

Tick Tock,

I’m in a prison of loneliness,

Tick Tock,

I should have cherished happiness.

Tick Tock,

I didn't appreciate your loving care,

Tick Tock,

 I never thought you wouldn't be there.

Tick Tock,

Now there is absolutely no one to console,

Tick Tock

My destitute and miserable, broken soul.

Tick Tock,

You are my sun, moon and star,

Tick Tock,

I will always wonder where you are.

Tick Tock!
Tick Tock!
Tick Tock!
Tick Tock!

I wish that fate would somehow  turn back the clock.


3-26-18
Alexis Y.

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Daniel Schack May 25, 2018 at 6:54 AM check out my tick tock on poetrysoup. nice write, Daniel schack

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 28, 2018 at 7:54 PM I feel your pain expressed exquisitely by your potent pen ink, Alexis. A poetess true are you. Very emotionally moving write. Aurora bright poetry. Love and joy always.

Gregory Richard Barden March 28, 2018 at 7:42 AM I can so relate to this melancholy and heart-wrenching write, Alexis - so well-done, and I love the repeating line. Blessings! :-)

Lisa Ricci March 28, 2018 at 6:13 AM Good Morning Alexis - Your repetition was well utilized to get your point across and to illustrate emotion. I believe we all think these thoughts. May this day find you well.

John Gondolf March 27, 2018 at 5:34 PM Alexis, we all learn from our mistakes and hopefully we get a second chance to practice what we learned. John

Tom Cunningham March 27, 2018 at 3:36 AM Lovely verse Alexis, we never truly appreciate them until they are gone. Sadly we have to keep moving forward, if only we could turn back the clock. Tom