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Tic Tock, Tic Tock

Why must we let your old relationship hinder our new one I'm a firm believer that in one's lifetime they may experience love a long the way But they will only experience one true love I'm not saying what you had with her wasn't real But my question to you is did it fulfill? She hurt you real bad, but eventually you will heal Please don't take too long because time is a enemy and not on our side And it goes by in a flash Embrace this burning passion that resides in my heart for only you I can tell you for sure that I've never had a love like this I know you're scared and don't want to get hurt Hurting you is not my goal, if I can I just want to love until your heartache is gone I know you love me too I see it in your eyes I feel it in your touch I hear it in your voice Just act on what you know is real Take a leap of faith my love But don't wait too long because time is a enemy and not on our side 11-6-16 Alexis Y.

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Date: 12/11/2016 1:26:00 PM
A great poem about having a leap of faith in love.
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Date: 12/11/2016 1:44:00 PM
Hi Afzal, Thanks for such a great comment. I appreciate the support: -) Alexis
Date: 11/10/2016 8:48:00 AM
Again I only wish you the best. Excellent write.
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Date: 11/9/2016 9:11:00 AM
A new love could well be the needed medicine to cure heartache; he ought to listen and heed encouragement; so let not time be wasted! Dr Alexis is capable of keeping him Young at heart:) Regards // paul
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Date: 11/8/2016 9:25:00 AM
So true about the tick tock of the clock; more people should seize the moment when their in love! Enjoyed your beautiful write Alexis!:)
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Date: 11/7/2016 3:18:00 PM
Beautiful passionate poem, Alexis. I hope he's listening too. Much love to you, lady.
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Date: 11/7/2016 11:54:00 AM
yes, time waits for no one.. wonderful pen, alexis..huggs
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Date: 11/7/2016 8:41:00 AM
Synchronicity is an important factor in any relationship dear, Alexis thus it is true that time make become an enemy when we delay for a long time! Good thought!
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Date: 11/7/2016 6:49:00 AM
I hope he reads this and understands. Often we let our past get in the way of our future and you are right, time waits for no one. I hope he opens his eyes and sees that someone wonderful is waiting for him. Sad but so mush truth and such a loving poem.
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Date: 11/6/2016 7:10:00 PM
a sad one filled with longing and hope and also understanding, Alexis. Very nice.
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Date: 11/6/2016 12:11:00 PM
- Time passes too quickly ... suddenly it's too late - A great poem, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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