Brian Anderson Poet Free verse

Tic Tock

tic tock
tic tock
teardrop
sodium-flavored
lollipop
                  long lines
                  stand alone
                  tic tock
                  time goes
                      on
                   waiting
short hand
long hand
fun fast
hurt slow
                  tic tock
                  tic tock
                  teardrop
                  sodium-flavored
                  lollipop
we all
lick

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Alison Sade Peñaranda April 23, 2009 at 7:50 AM this is great...makes me smile after a long day from school...take care... _chily_

Charlene Bird April 19, 2009 at 8:44 PM I love your unique style, so clever!

Daver Austin April 19, 2009 at 6:36 AM Good layout....good idea....all about all of us at one time or another. Love, daver

Charmaine Chircop April 19, 2009 at 3:16 AM i like the rhymth tick tock ;-)