Tic Talk

aka "No More Masks" or "Avon Calling" It seems that your looks are genetic And no one would claim they're magnetic Improve the aesthetic! Apply a cosmetic! Synthetic is seldom pathetic!

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/21/2021 8:45:00 AM

Makeup makes a lot of us feel more attractive. Love the way you suggest improving the "aesthetic. Unfortunately, face lifts do sometimes produce pathetic results. I'll stick with makeup! Hugs, Carolyn

Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/22/2021 10:16:00 AM

French women have clearly established, "A little dab will do yuh" ..Aloha! Rico

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/20/2021 1:26:00 PM

ha! love the title, rico! (had to read it twice before it clicked...)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/22/2021 10:15:00 AM

I am chuffed that it took an expert to notice! Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2021 12:55:00 PM

lol glad you didnt mention ding dong avon calling or you would get the pc brigade calling 'filth' lol:-) hugs jan xx