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Tic Tac Toe

*This poem will make more sense to Americans who watched t.v. in the 1970’s TIC TAC TOE the board real tidy. today Tiger would hold together the family photo. how old the queuing. surely the Brady six hated tic tac toe - the anniversary cake blows the squares, it’s centerfold - Borgnine, Lynde and Rivers. family full of puzzling fun, riveting answers. Alice lines them up - his and her kids, girls on one side, boys on the other, mom and dad, and plops herself in the middle, as an inclusion. delusional housekeeper dates Sam the butcher. braces and nose job…Marcia…Marcia…Marcia singing group, house of cards, a charm bracelet. Tiger’s a thief. Kitty Carryall, his beef. blame Bobby. Jan gets revenge by sneezing. sneezing…sneezing…sneezing, sends the dog away. “in what state was Lincoln born?” Lynde’s square lit up. He grabs hold of his muse: “like all of us naked and screaming.” sardonic tic, tac, toe vibrations of Uncle Arthur’s laugh.

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Date: 11/6/2023 8:41:00 PM
I got the Lynde reference, but wasn’t a B. Bunch fan. Off at school in ‘79’s so not much tv, but must say this. Poem is fun nonetheless!
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Date: 11/6/2023 1:07:00 PM
I think this is Hollywood squares because of the reference to my favorite "square" Paul Lynde. Sure do miss that guy, Was your reference to the Brady Bunch because of the way their show always started with them in the square? When I first started Zoom, it reminded me of seeing the Brady Bunch. haha!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2023 2:34:00 PM
LOL, right, zoom was like the Brady Bunch. Hope you enjoyed :)
Date: 11/6/2023 12:58:00 AM
I am not familiar with the series, but I like the flow of your poem. Hugs and blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2023 9:20:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 11/5/2023 7:03:00 PM
Paul Lynde (Was that his first name?) looked exactly like a friend of mine, a wall-paperer (back when that was a thriving trade), who used to wear a pink and white searsucker sport coat with gray chinos to synagogue. Thanks for the trip down memory lane, Kim. ~ Just sayin'
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2023 9:20:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed! I saw an anniversary cake with the Brady’s on it. As I wrote I remembered Hollywood Squares. I wonder if your friend could laugh like Paul Lynde! ;)
Date: 11/5/2023 1:43:00 PM
a tic tack toe--a hodge podge of American TV in the 70s...most creative, Kim. I liked it. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2023 9:18:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 11/5/2023 11:30:00 AM
I didn't quite understand this, but all I know is that it flowed really well. Enjoyed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2023 12:05:00 PM
Thanks for reading it! American t.v. Shows

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