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Thunderstorm

The gods are bowling, Zeus throws a lightening bolt; Thus, a thunderstorm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/19/2009 2:10:00 PM
When i was growing up my father told me that is was caused the thunderstorms! lol, and i love the mythology you got in here!
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Date: 4/4/2009 2:55:00 PM
fun poetry! Jim
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Date: 3/29/2009 4:51:00 AM
Got me smiling with this one. Nice take on mythology. Enjoyed it. Karen
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:02:00 PM
Dear Elizabeth, YOU have a great sense of humor YOU may want to Edit th first word I am intrigued with YOUR POETRY ALWAYS YOURS... HG
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:19:00 PM
The gods are bowling---- what a great line. good job with this write.
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Date: 3/25/2009 4:45:00 PM
I think it was Rip Van Wnkle who first used the analogy of thunder and bowling, but your great poem certainly adds zest to the concept!
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:55:00 PM
powerful imagery, mythical writing too, nice
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