Thunderous Billow

Thunderous billow
Dark clouds swiften much beyond
Heart is gust-wind plucked

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Daniel Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 6:59 AM
That final line tells the pain behind, Russell, get well soon!
Pandit Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 5:51 AM
Well written Senryu-- the last line makes an impact.
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