Get Your Premium Membership

Thunderous Awe

The color orange Strikes the whole sky with brightness Increasing splendor It has an awesome power Fills me with thunderous awe
Russell Sivey Contest: Nature the popular theme Sponsor: Kim Morrison 5/31/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/1/2013 4:26:00 PM
beautiful tanka, my friend
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2013 2:07:00 PM
the thunderous line is a very unique one, Russell. I know how you love nature.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2013 6:11:00 AM
orange hihi I just imagined the sun setting nice short poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2013 12:02:00 AM
... well orange is my favorite color so you already have my vote, there... lol. I loved the drama in this one... Thunderous Awe (it's such an epic way of describing your amazement). Way to go on this one... I liked it! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2013 9:05:00 PM
Thunderous indeed , that's a beautiful expressed Tanka poem, thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Erich
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2013 7:25:00 PM
Thunderous applause from me Russell, I am sure you will do well.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2013 6:16:00 PM
Russell...your poem moves from start to finish...love the intensity....
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2013 9:47:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your visit..Make sure that you read my notation on "Light Reveals"...Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs