Thundering Silence

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The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines
containing fourteen words with a break in
between the two parts. Both parts deal with the
same thought and create a picture.

For Your Choice Y - Sponsor, Brian Strand

Loud as thunder crashing between clouds- it strikes silence- deafening lovers after the quarrel

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2020 12:04:00 PM

this was a great poem. I liked its originality. Congrats.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2020 9:31:00 PM

Well done! Congratulations!

Constance La France

Date: 10/11/2020 6:42:00 AM

Sandra, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- Septolet with this excellent poem, a FAV for me, great image too _Constance

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2020 5:28:00 PM

Thank you, Constance, for this, and all the fine contests you sponsor! I enjoyed this form, and I so much appreciate your congrats, nice comment, and the FAV. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2020 1:10:00 PM

- Beautifully written, Sandra :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Radice

Date: 10/10/2020 12:16:00 PM

Loved this. It certainly paints a picture and conjures up atmosphere. I also liked the oxymoron of the title that sets the scene for the septolet. Cheers - Gary