Sandra Haight Poet Verse

Notes About The Poem

The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines
containing fourteen words with a break in 
between the two parts. Both parts deal with the 
same thought and create a picture.

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Thundering Silence

                      
                      Loud
                as thunder
       crashing between clouds-
          it strikes
        
                  silence- 
              deafening lovers
                   after the quarrel

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Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2020 at 12:04 PM this was a great poem. I liked its originality. Congrats.

Kim Rodrigues October 11, 2020 at 9:31 PM Well done! Congratulations!

Constance La France October 11, 2020 at 6:42 AM Sandra, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- Septolet with this excellent poem, a FAV for me, great image too _Constance Sandra Haight October 30, 2020 at 5:28 PM Thank you, Constance, for this, and all the fine contests you sponsor! I enjoyed this form, and I so much appreciate your congrats, nice comment, and the FAV. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2020 at 1:10 PM - Beautifully written, Sandra :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Radice October 10, 2020 at 12:16 PM Loved this. It certainly paints a picture and conjures up atmosphere. I also liked the oxymoron of the title that sets the scene for the septolet. Cheers - Gary