Thundering Charge

Pounding driving run
Rubber squeaking against wood
Pound step pound all net

By Robb A. Kopp
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Robb, What a great Senryu! You put the reader in your shoes with this exciting poem. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Connie
Haick Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 10:14 AM
Dear Robb, my congratulations on your win in the contest- another win!! Peace, Audrey
Anderson Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:27 PM
Hey Robb, Congratulations on your win in the contest. ....Jimmy
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February 19, 2010 at 10:57 PM
I can feel your deep interest on this game, Robb, you just put your heart on your win for this, a deserving one. (^_^) Noel.
Dufresne Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 5:29 AM
cool I remember it well! Godt winded just reading it. Congratulations, Robb! very well done!
Brown Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 4:32 AM
I definitely love this one. Great job! Well deserved win in the contest!
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February 18, 2010 at 3:27 AM
Bravo and drum rolls! Robb, your poem is the 3rd place winner in the Poetry Soup member contest SPORT'S MAD? Sponsored by: Brian Strand. Well done with this action senryu! Smiles, Dane Ann
Davis Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 6:33 PM
Great poem Robb, keep it up! Shelli
Richards Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 4:44 PM
Well done, well said in three short verses! congratulations, Robb! ~ Carrie
Jordan Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 4:41 PM
Robb, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, mj
Johnson Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Great writing and great win. Congratulations. Joyce
Strand Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 8:57 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Robert.Rgds Brian.My latest contest Poulter's Measure is now open.
Strand Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 11:43 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Rob.Rgds Brian
Brown Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 10:08 AM
I read this excellent poem of yours today and I enjoyed it Robb. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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