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Thundering Charge

Pounding driving run
Rubber squeaking against wood
Pound step pound all net

By Robb A. Kopp
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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/26/2010 4:47:00 PM

Robb, What a great Senryu! You put the reader in your shoes with this exciting poem. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Connie

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/24/2010 10:14:00 AM

Dear Robb, my congratulations on your win in the contest- another win!! Peace, Audrey

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/20/2010 5:27:00 PM

Hey Robb, Congratulations on your win in the contest. ....Jimmy

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/19/2010 10:57:00 PM

I can feel your deep interest on this game, Robb, you just put your heart on your win for this, a deserving one. (^_^) Noel.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/19/2010 5:29:00 AM

cool I remember it well! Godt winded just reading it. Congratulations, Robb! very well done!

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 2/18/2010 4:32:00 AM

I definitely love this one. Great job! Well deserved win in the contest!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/18/2010 3:27:00 AM

Bravo and drum rolls! Robb, your poem is the 3rd place winner in the Poetry Soup member contest SPORT'S MAD? Sponsored by: Brian Strand. Well done with this action senryu! Smiles, Dane Ann

Shelli Davis

Date: 2/17/2010 6:33:00 PM

Great poem Robb, keep it up! Shelli