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Thunderclap

Thunderclap here Pitch dark clouds gather again Sound of my fears.

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John Lawless

Date: 5/16/2018 7:57:00 AM

They do trigger a primal shudder...within us.

Harpreet Kaur
Date: 5/16/2018 8:20:00 AM

Yes, they do. I am trying to tell that the clouds seem to be giving a vice to the fears raging inside me already... thanks for taking time to read and comment.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/15/2018 8:40:00 PM

momentous haiku...wishing it would rain but I could easily skip the thunder which so often accompanies it. Good one.

Harpreet Kaur
Date: 5/15/2018 8:47:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by and encouraging me with your thoughtful comment.