Thunderclap

Thunderclap here
Pitch dark clouds gather again
Sound of my fears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lawless Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 7:57 AM
They do trigger a primal shudder...within us.
Kaur Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Yes, they do. I am trying to tell that the clouds seem to be giving a vice to the fears raging inside me already... thanks for taking time to read and comment.
Poteet Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:40 PM
momentous haiku...wishing it would rain but I could easily skip the thunder which so often accompanies it. Good one.
Kaur Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Thank you for stopping by and encouraging me with your thoughtful comment.
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