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Thunder In the Dawn

the thunder in your voice precocious in the dawn
     mighty tower of white crashing down a frothy song
          as sand shook beneath my shore planted feet
               the rushing wave covered the beach like a sheet

Rithimus Divisa 4 Poetry Contest
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From Summer Storm
written 6-2-2020
first entered:  Brian's Select 3 contest  7-3-2020 Brian Strand Sponsor

Copyright © Jeanne Mcgee | Year Posted 2020

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John Fleming Date: 8/30/2020 3:36:00 AM A thunderous cacophony of sound! Certainly, as Andrea remarks, very spectacular...creates a notable impression. Very well penned, Jeanne. All the very best. :) john Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 8/30/2020 9:14:00 PM I love storms...even though this last one has wiped out my small Mexican village pretty heavily. Clean up is underway but will take awhile...

Jack Horne Date: 8/9/2020 4:33:00 AM a very powerful write indeed Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 8/9/2020 12:13:00 PM Thanks Jack. and nice to see you. Jeanne

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/8/2020 2:01:00 PM wow, I really love the four lines you used. The imagery is spectacular. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 8/9/2020 12:12:00 PM Good Morning Andrea...thank you for the lovely comment...hope you are having a fantastic weekend. :D

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/6/2020 11:52:00 AM Perfect imagery Jeanne, a verse in its own right. Wish you luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 8/6/2020 1:32:00 PM You're the sweetest, Tom!