Jeanne Mcgee Poet Rhyme

Thunder In the Dawn

the thunder in your voice precocious in the dawn
     mighty tower of white crashing down a frothy song
          as sand shook beneath my shore planted feet
               the rushing wave covered the beach like a sheet

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From Summer Storm
written 6-2-2020
first entered:  Brian's Select 3 contest  7-3-2020 Brian Strand Sponsor

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John Fleming August 30, 2020 at 3:36 AM A thunderous cacophony of sound! Certainly, as Andrea remarks, very spectacular...creates a notable impression. Very well penned, Jeanne. All the very best. :) john Jeanne Mcgee August 30, 2020 at 9:14 PM I love storms...even though this last one has wiped out my small Mexican village pretty heavily. Clean up is underway but will take awhile...

Jack Horne August 9, 2020 at 4:33 AM a very powerful write indeed Jeanne Mcgee August 9, 2020 at 12:13 PM Thanks Jack. and nice to see you. Jeanne

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2020 at 2:01 PM wow, I really love the four lines you used. The imagery is spectacular. Jeanne Mcgee August 9, 2020 at 12:12 PM Good Morning Andrea...thank you for the lovely comment...hope you are having a fantastic weekend. :D

Tom Cunningham August 6, 2020 at 11:52 AM Perfect imagery Jeanne, a verse in its own right. Wish you luck in the contest. Tom Jeanne Mcgee August 6, 2020 at 1:32 PM You're the sweetest, Tom!