Thunder and Lighting

A storm is brewing as oaks hold  their gait,
While inky clouds expel flammable, meshed wires
Invading nightfall, hiding the moon in a chain…
And furious thunder prepares a harsh burial
With a lightning  that rages from a sky,
To trigger floods , unrelenting  like a wild gutter .

So, the mildness of April    hastily retreats
As tempest  looms unto  hour's dark prophecy--
The roses gone    gone   before their lush flowering 
When this  firework  of lava zigzags
Right before my eyes:  a vision of abstract
Mural  in a jolted flare, so  irefully blinding

That spring’s pageant drowns my view .




For Brian Strand: March 18 Premiere Contest
Submitted  3/10/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 6:51 PM
Back with congrats, nette. Well done.
Ashley Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 4:10 PM
Your superb and expressive imagery is so unique and vibrant Nette. Your beautiful poem is as brilliant as the lava zigzags you write of.. Congratulations on your excellent win!
Horsman Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 5:17 AM
Oh you certainly did here follow the contest rules, and created a gem, believing it was a painting from your mind..wonderful poetry nette..
Smith Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Just beautiful nette
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 1:15 AM
amazing imagery sweet Nette! Good luck :)-luloo
Gauthier Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 4:46 PM
That is one hell of a storm, nette. I am staying indoors... to read more poetry of course. Lovely, well done.
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 2:21 PM
- A powerful sight, Nette: "firework of lava zigzags" - Luck in the contest :) - Happy new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Painted with thunder and lightning, your poem shines without the sound of storm..chosen words..well written, as always..best for a win, nette.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Great visual: unrelenting like a wild gutter .
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