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Thunder

Thunder rolled slowly across the sky
Like some great beast about to die.

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Kim Rodrigues

November 16, 2016 at 8:59 AM

Wow! I can visualize the fall! Congrats, Jerome!

Jerome Malenfant

November 16, 2016 at 11:33 AM

Thanks.

Jan Allison

November 15, 2016 at 5:38 PM

Fabulous imagery Jerome congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Jerome Malenfant

November 15, 2016 at 6:36 PM

Thanks.

Sandra Haight

November 15, 2016 at 9:06 AM

Very powerful imagery, Jerome. Congrats on your fine placement! Sandra

Jerome Malenfant

November 15, 2016 at 1:20 PM

Thanks.

Paul Callus

November 15, 2016 at 7:43 AM

An ominous effect runs through these two lines, Jerome. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Jerome Malenfant

November 15, 2016 at 1:28 PM

Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

November 14, 2016 at 8:41 PM

wow, I like this image! It truly does sound like a beast!! Congrats.

Jerome Malenfant

November 15, 2016 at 1:26 PM

Thanks. These lines are the beginnings of (hopefully) a longer poem I've been struggling with, trying for a "T.S. Elliot" feel. I've got about the first 4 stanzas but haven't yet figured out where to go with it after that.