Thunder

thunder you
& your trouble trying
to murmur trying
to fight frustration-
don't shy from his shrieks
father sky he is meek-
light flashing freak
too high up to speak
quite a violent
violator- through flesh
you break, groping
for blood to take, sorry
for my (barenaked bones)
dusty moans blown 
by the wind- thunder you
never ask before you 
come in
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 28, 2010 at 5:52 PM
deep write, enjoyed..P.D.
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August 28, 2010 at 5:30 PM
Very descriptive and awesome words to depict thunder..Rachel.. enjoyed with luv.. this happy weekend...
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