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For: Wind, Rain, Snow, Thunder or Sun in 8-12 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Photo by NoName_13 on Pixabay

The thunder sounds from far away,
wild wind runs before it carrying whispers 
of the coming storm.

Clouds are dark and gray
like cloistered nuns escaping hell,
and bursting out with rain.

Lightning flashes her skirts
and her consort thunder gives chase,
disregarding those beneath their feet.

Wind and rain keep the beat 
of the storm's tempestuous dance,
becoming cyclone's destructive stance.

Copyright © Chetta Achara | Year Posted 2024

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Triny Xiang Date: 5/13/2024 1:24:00 AM Tornados have no fury like an enraged nun. Such mind bending imagery. I'll look for a sister's habit in a cumulusnimbus next time. Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 4/5/2024 4:48:00 PM Chetta, wonderfully penned with great imagery, congratulations on your winning placement. Login to Reply Chetta Achara Date: 4/5/2024 5:20:00 PM Thank you.

Jerry Brotherton Date: 3/21/2024 5:31:00 PM Another brilliant poem from your pen, my friend. A fav for me. Login to Reply Chetta Achara Date: 3/21/2024 7:32:00 PM You are so sweet. Thank you.

Hilda Greenhough Date: 3/21/2024 4:08:00 PM I love this poem. I'll fav it. I liked esp. the cloistered nuns escaping he'll. Login to Reply Chetta Achara Date: 3/21/2024 7:31:00 PM Thank you.