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Thrust Within Mine Charge

. Heat rushed through her fleshy parts from the thrust within mine charge That look on her face as I made flight for rest did melt this cold heart Oh I panicked yet mustered the wake to cause her dream in sleep

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2011 11:55:00 AM

james, wow! mustered... what a way to captivate yourself in dreams..enjoyed,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/22/2010 4:25:00 PM

Intensely passionate James.. luv the way u phrased your words so temptingly luv.. SOUP MAIL... thankxxx..luv..

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/22/2010 5:15:00 AM

To cause one's dream is always so beautiful..and to melt a cold heart..is passionate and warm indeed..So nice to read you James.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2010 5:02:00 AM

I have been bamboozled by the last phrase...Very passionate..Sara

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/20/2010 9:07:00 AM

Andrea's comment had me chuckling. I think this does sound very erotic. Nice to see a different form Sijo as this is one I will have to look up. Thank you for all your comments. I am feeling better and have a ton of emails to return. God Bless Phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/20/2010 8:09:00 AM

Very passionate, dear James! I hope you and Noah are preparing to have a special Thanksgiving and I'm so happy you're doing well with work. It's so nice to have you posting poetry regularly, my friend. Wishing you and Noah joy and peace during the holidays! Love, Carolyn

Suresh Iyer

Date: 11/19/2010 11:13:00 PM

THAT was riveting and interesting