Thrum at the Threshold

Written: August 4, 2026 for a contest by Silent One Quote: "All opposites unite, All that is profane becomes sacred again." By Rumi. ****************** I move through the dusk where the air feels half-holy, half-feral— a thin-veined shimmer trembling between grace and grit. Some nights, the mind cleaves like a slow-burn seedpod, one part stretching skyward, one part anchoring in dark loam where old impulses hush and hear. A drumbeat in that place— A firm, orotund thrum like aureole tracing archaeology of rust like a breath caught at the threshold of ardor and augury I've felt the infinite in finite foofaraw a faint flare of a fancy that flouts all fetters the way a memory falters and still summons song. the way serendipity sidles sunward And sails, steers by secret stars And I've peered past the profane. in the pellucid, pearl-lit moments: a misshaped munificence of misery a molded by mourning mercy, a trembling truth that teeters but never topples. Both breathe beneath— the balm and the bruise the straight line and the stumble, the silence and the thunder. I walk with them as if they were twin shadows weaving at my heels, each whispering its untamed vision of what I might become.
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Guptar Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 8:19 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your high win in this contest with a lovely poem depicting your journey from deviants to divine, with beautiful imagery and a flowing rhythm. Your profundity of thought is elegant as usual as are the alliterations and choice of words. Particularly appreciated stanzas 4 and 5. Wish you a blessed weekend.
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August 28, 2026 at 7:14 AM
Dear Sotto, for me the poem seems to say that wholeness does not come from choosing between the balm and the bruise, the straight line and the stumble, or the sacred and the feral. Instead, it walks alongside both forces, accepting their tensions as part of becoming. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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August 8, 2026 at 4:51 PM
I, too, prefer silence....too much 'talking' and noise I find chaotice. Well done, sir.
Rolland Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 12:44 PM
nice poetry, preferring silence than thunder, poet always inspires me
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