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Throwin' a Punch

no need for brass knuckles for a knockout punch ~ just a pair of brass balls

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Date: 5/18/2023 5:37:00 AM
- You scoring a brace, Lin :) - hugs
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/18/2023 5:42:00 AM
Hi, Anne-Lise. Thanks and hugs for you, too.
Date: 5/17/2023 5:44:00 PM
Hard to duck from this one....knockout !
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Date: 5/18/2023 5:41:00 AM
Hi Paul. Sometimes we only get one punch, so we'd better make it a knockout. Thanks a bunch.
Date: 5/17/2023 1:38:00 PM
hahaha, you scored a direct hit here Lin!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/17/2023 1:47:00 PM
Thanks for liking my TKO, Jan.
Date: 5/17/2023 11:56:00 AM
Very funny Lin! I like it. Duck and jab! :) Blessings!
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Date: 5/17/2023 12:09:00 PM
lol Thanks, Sam. A gut punch or two for good measure.
Date: 5/17/2023 9:57:00 AM
LOL! I love pretend boxing with my grandson. Always keep it low key..don’t want either of us to get a black eye or broken nose.
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Date: 5/17/2023 10:16:00 AM
lol good idea, Kim. Especially when he gets a bit bigger!
Date: 5/17/2023 9:42:00 AM
a slight jab, a subtle feint, a left hook.
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Date: 5/17/2023 9:44:00 AM
and they never saw it comin.' Nice body work, John.

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