Throwin' a Punch

no need for brass knuckles for a knockout punch ~ just a pair of brass balls
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Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 5:37 AM
- You scoring a brace, Lin :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 5:42 AM
Hi, Anne-Lise. Thanks and hugs for you, too.
Willason Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Hard to duck from this one....knockout !
Lane Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Hi Paul. Sometimes we only get one punch, so we'd better make it a knockout. Thanks a bunch.
Allison Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 1:38 PM
hahaha, you scored a direct hit here Lin!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 1:47 PM
Thanks for liking my TKO, Jan.
Kauffman Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 11:56 AM
Very funny Lin! I like it. Duck and jab! :) Blessings!
Lane Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 12:09 PM
lol Thanks, Sam. A gut punch or two for good measure.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 9:57 AM
LOL! I love pretend boxing with my grandson. Always keep it low key..don’t want either of us to get a black eye or broken nose.
Lane Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 10:16 AM
lol good idea, Kim. Especially when he gets a bit bigger!
Lawless Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 9:42 AM
a slight jab, a subtle feint, a left hook.
Lane Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 9:44 AM
and they never saw it comin.' Nice body work, John.
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