Throughout the Storm

Thoughts run throughout my mind.
Lightning and thunder bring out remote
ragedies I once attempted to forget.

My tears fall,and are replaced by raindrops.
Just as you replaced the life long sunshine 
I didn't force you to take.
By an eternal,cloudy,and cold july morning.
And now the day I used to expect with enourmus faith 
has turned into a sad storm that 
seems to naot have a sun behind it.

But now is my time,
to come out of this gray storm i once thought
was immortal.
Rain has stopped from falling down.
Once again I've gone trhoughout the storm.


Juan Onate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/25/2009 1:29:00 AM
great poem i loved ..and dnt ever stop writing... love anna
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Date: 5/20/2009 5:13:00 PM
Love the imagery of the storm...Don't worry storms they past then soon sunshine follows upon its cast. -Alley
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Date: 5/6/2009 10:57:00 AM
lovely Juan!!!
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Date: 4/28/2009 4:52:00 PM
very very nice verse & message ..please for the sake of its specialness send it through spell check? Light & Love
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Date: 4/28/2009 4:28:00 PM
Great! It is wonderful to get out of the storm and to move on planting new life..Very nice poem. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 4/25/2009 3:18:00 PM
Juan I love how you write from the heart. You are very talented. You can do anything you set your heart to.
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Date: 4/25/2009 10:29:00 AM
Nice work, reads well, keep it up...Raul
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Date: 4/24/2009 1:17:00 PM
You have great talent Juan! Keep sharing- darkpoet
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