Throughout the Storm

Thoughts run throughout my mind.
Lightning and thunder bring out remote
ragedies I once attempted to forget.

My tears fall,and are replaced by raindrops.
Just as you replaced the life long sunshine 
I didn't force you to take.
By an eternal,cloudy,and cold july morning.
And now the day I used to expect with enourmus faith 
has turned into a sad storm that 
seems to naot have a sun behind it.

But now is my time,
to come out of this gray storm i once thought
was immortal.
Rain has stopped from falling down.
Once again I've gone trhoughout the storm.


Juan Onate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mayall Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 1:29 AM
great poem i loved ..and dnt ever stop writing... love anna
Poe Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 5:13 PM
Love the imagery of the storm...Don't worry storms they past then soon sunshine follows upon its cast. -Alley
Bilyeu Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 10:57 AM
lovely Juan!!!
Guzzi Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 4:52 PM
very very nice verse & message ..please for the sake of its specialness send it through spell check? Light & Love
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Great! It is wonderful to get out of the storm and to move on planting new life..Very nice poem. Lovingly, Dane
Kittrell Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 3:18 PM
Juan I love how you write from the heart. You are very talented. You can do anything you set your heart to.
Moreno Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 10:29 AM
Nice work, reads well, keep it up...Raul
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April 24, 2009 at 1:17 PM
You have great talent Juan! Keep sharing- darkpoet
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