Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

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Through Youth's Eyes

Despite June’s tempest, I relish life’s grace

         My eyes marking the stencil of ripped trees

     A yesterday which draws me to embrace ;

The comfort of kin amidst storm’s reprise.



For Gregory R Barden's Rithimus Divisa 5 Contest
Excerpt  from  the poem Woodland of My Youth 
Dated 4/04,2018
Resubmitted 9/5/2020

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Elaine George September 20, 2020 at 4:26 PM Beautiful, dear Nette. Many congrat's on your win.

Elaine George September 20, 2020 at 4:23 PM Beautiful, dear Nette. Many congrat's on your win.

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2020 at 2:14 PM Wonderful, Nette. Congratulations.

Sam Kauffman September 20, 2020 at 9:31 AM This flows so wonderfully, Nette, with your signature stunning imagery. Congratulations on your winning placement!

Gordon Mcconnell September 10, 2020 at 2:12 PM Nice penning Nette, a great 4 liner!

Vijay Pandit September 5, 2020 at 5:06 AM Great lines you selected for the contest, Nette.

Tom Cunningham September 5, 2020 at 3:31 AM Beautiful lines Nette, a poem in its own right Tom

Kim Rodrigues September 4, 2020 at 7:16 PM A pretty four lines!

Mystic Rose Rose September 4, 2020 at 6:37 PM You always impress me with your evocative words and well penned poem Nette, sending blessing from my heart.