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Through your eyes

Random thoughts.. I realize that i love you..not because of who you are...but because of how i feel when i am around you... I realize that you and i could easily go our separate ways..and yes...maybe we would be ok... but i have seen us..together...i see how you look at me...and is mirrored through your eyes...I see the long walks...the strolls in the parks...I have seen through your eyes...I have seen you in the kitchen..preparing a delightful meal by candlelight.... us sitting beneath trees relating story after story... I have seen through your eyes.. us dancing till our bodies are wet...I have seen us ramping ,not in a ramping shop...but us playing gleefully like children...forgetting time,forgetting space..forgetting place.. through your eyes i have seen us in a garden hosing you in laughing ..though not finding it funny... Then through your eyes i have seen us warmly embracing..bodies intertwined...bodies speaking without uttering a single word.. Now i know to you these may be unreal...but these are my dreams i see for us ...through your eyes..

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Date: 9/9/2018 7:58:00 AM
This is what a love poem should be but seldom is. I hope you have shared this with her, Paul.
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Paul Nairne
Date: 9/9/2018 8:57:00 PM
Coincidentally her name is Karen,and yes I do occasionally.