Through this web

Will you then twist my vision into a perfect blur? 
A landscape warped, a world I half perceive, 
Like gazing through a rain-streaked silk-screen, 
Cut the edges sharp to watch my colors bleed 
I ask this not in fear, but in a curious way, 
A yearning for a change in how I see, 
To break minted realities, you bind me down, 
And let gentle chaos set me free 

Excellent, pull me under morning's silver water, 
Where the light shivers on the shifting tides, 
A silent world, a cool, smooth embrace profound, 
Leave the surface world for a moment unplanned 
Let bubbles rise, like whispers to the sky, 
As burdens drift away in watery haze, 
And quiet fills the space where worries lie, 
A baptism in shadowed, mist-drenched maze 

Be sure to make it headfirst, the plunge complete, 
No hesitant toe dipped or cautious resolve, 
But total surrender to the chilling deep, 
A letting go, to watch my anchored self dissolve 
Let logic fade, as instinct takes its hold, 
And senses sharpen in the liquid gloom, 
To find a truth that can't be bought or sold, 
A seed of courage sprouting in drowned tomb 
Let this immersion quench my every ire, 
I will tear through this web, reborn in fire

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Date: 4/20/2025 10:35:00 PM
Powerful. A love that demands everything -
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Date: 4/21/2025 4:07:00 PM
A love that is a spider web of emotion, eventually it requires you to escape or.... sincerly A.S.
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