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Through the Winter Panes

I will remember you in the brightest sunshine! And even better in the misty rain. Or in the sounds of crunchy, Chicago snows. Beneath our running lovers' feet! I will remember you each bright time I smell popcorn, so warm and buttery. Oh, how you relished that treat! Snuggling next to our first Christmas tree. But, God took you home to His eternity. Indeed, a better place! Now, please hold that glistening door open? So I will once again behold your sweet face! September 4, 2019

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Date: 9/5/2019 3:19:00 PM
Such a picture so clear and crystal Panagiota, filled with sadness but with hope too. Such well what can one say!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/5/2019 4:48:00 PM
I thank you Gordon, my friend. No phenomenal imagery about waves crashing against rocks, just words I would say to another friend. I remember those days with immense fondness and gratitude. Thank you for what you saw in it. Love, Panagiota
Date: 9/4/2019 7:10:00 PM
Somehow, I think he can hear your words, and he will, indeed, hold the door open for you. Here's hoping ! :) gw
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Date: 9/4/2019 7:17:00 PM
Awww..I like that. I know he is proud of me. We lived on Carmen Avenue then. In a teeny apartment. I loved it. Near Foster and Mikwaukee. Nice! Panagiota
Date: 9/4/2019 8:29:00 AM
Sweet write! Crunchy snow, warm and buttery popcorn, hold that glistening door open. You’ve written a beauty here, most humble and glorious poet!
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Date: 9/4/2019 8:36:00 AM
Hi Bright Star of The Soup! So pleased you liked this write. I can still smell the popcorn and the winkling tree. Yes,mam sure he has the door open! Thank you for reading and commenting. A double bonus!! Panagiota
Date: 9/4/2019 6:55:00 AM
Beautiful Panagiota.
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Date: 9/4/2019 8:00:00 AM
Ah, Charles, dearest Poet, so grateful for your time and comment. Spumoni Huggs, Panagiota
Date: 9/4/2019 6:14:00 AM
So it be...A lovely write
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Date: 9/4/2019 7:55:00 AM
Thank you for being a support to this humble poet, By one of the finest poets here. Love, Panagiota
Date: 9/4/2019 5:54:00 AM
how poignant is this lovely song, panagiota!...huggs
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Date: 9/4/2019 7:53:00 AM
Hello Great Poetess! Thank you for a sweet comment! Panagiota

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