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Through the Windows

Those lofty trees move backwards swiftly and so are those bitter past memories; Uncertain of the things that are in front and so are hitches about to confront; All I can do is sit quiet and take the ride. Many a time I greet the radiant dawn and sometimes I meet the menacing tunnel. But it's for me to decide whether to detest or relish the ride. And I opt for the latter and so started delighting the drive through the windows shutter

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Date: 2/21/2021 6:22:00 AM
Yes, there are many adventures ahead to relish. I have images of a teen sneaking out their window to rendezvous with a first love. I enjoyed your poem. My parents told us a cautionary tale of a young girl who died with her lover in a car crash after sneaking out her window. Perhaps I would have enjoyed more window adventures had I not heeded their story.
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Date: 2/17/2021 10:53:00 AM
Lovely write and a beautiful message. Really liked the message in last line. Take care Rama
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Date: 2/17/2021 5:57:00 AM
Hi Supraja, You’ve penned a well written poem with good imagery. I liked the positive tone of your write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/11/2021 5:27:00 PM
Lovely imagery as well as positive message, Supraja. thanks for sharing.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/13/2021 4:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea... Glad you liked it...
Date: 2/10/2021 7:21:00 AM
I like how you painted scenes of nature--awesome details, Supraja. So well written!
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Date: 2/10/2021 10:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay... Glad you liked it...
Date: 2/10/2021 5:08:00 AM
But it's for me to decide whether to detest or relish the ride...well said!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/10/2021 5:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim
Date: 2/10/2021 4:05:00 AM
Creative work. I wonder are the shutters open or closed? I enjoyed reading it because it drew me quietly into the story told in poetic form. Sara
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/10/2021 4:38:00 AM
Closed while travelling through the tunnel and opened while enjoying the ride... Thank you so much for stopping by, Sara... Glad you enjoyed...
Date: 2/10/2021 1:14:00 AM
Great descriptions and emotions. ~~
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/10/2021 1:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor

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