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Through the Open Door

I was standing there and did not go through the open door I had every chance and still I stood outside the open door I could see the life I waited for just through the open door still there was fear so I did not go through the open door the voices whispered in my ear can't you see the open door hurry now hurry go through the open door fore if you don't its sure to close your chance will be no more and as I built the courage to go through the open door I heard it creak, then heard it slammed and watched the closing door and I collapsed and cried and cried because i did not go I cried until I heard a voice I heard it say to me you cry because you did not go I gave you every chance but because I love you so I opened up a window

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