Through the Mist - Natural Metaphor Contest
Listen to the turbulent waters
as they cascade over the boulders.
forcing a path, so they can carry on peacefully
to find tranquility and peace ahead.
Life is like this,
as mist lingering over the open stretch of water
blinding you, making going forward difficult,
rough waters can force you to change course at times,
look back through the mist watch yourself re-appear.
Penned January 19 2017
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