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Through the mist

Through the mist The buoyant mist that veils the remote past, Is like a haze before the eyes that blinds, Blurs to mask the futuristic vision, Thereby leaving the bright present aghast, If it so much so obscures the clear sight, Righteousness one is unable to fight, Wake up, bite the bullet and make the choice, Let condense the mist, so as you can rise ! Written by Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 24th, 2014 For contest 'Through the mist' by Nette Onclaud

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Date: 9/3/2014 2:57:00 PM
Your last line the cream on the pie. Condense the mist... great line
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Date: 8/25/2014 5:50:00 AM
Great choice of topics for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 8/24/2014 10:20:00 AM
Beautiful words of wisdom...hugs Tim
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