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Through the Eyes of a Twin

Through The Eyes of A Twin (Faux Limerick) Sometimes I wonder is it just me Visions in my head that I can see Fear grips at me so strong I thought boy this is wrong Rebuking Satan told him to flee I went to the windows looked outside Then moved from room to room with great stride Oh girl you need to quit Was I having a fit I began to pray fear didn’t subside In my mind I was seeing this attack Just stood still didn’t know how to react Lord where did that come from Why did I see this harm Was I having an awful flashback Continued to pray and shook my head May be it was something I had read These thoughts I did not need They just could not proceed An attack I would certainly dread A week later on I got this call My twin began to explain it all The vision did occur What I saw was a blur As she spoke all I could do was ball Over the miles I had heard her scream The attack was broken in midstream Through my eyes I could see The Lord had heard my plea Now I see it was not a daydream When Spirit lead we must intercede For there just may be an urgent need We must stand in the gap Stop Satan in his trap The Lord will answer our prayer indeed

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Date: 5/16/2016 10:49:00 PM
Mary, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 3:15:00 PM
MARY DUHART, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 7/13/2010 7:29:00 AM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Mary. Love, Carol
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