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Through the Eyes of a Child



I remember the home where I was a child,
            The sweet little window in my bedroom;
It had a lovely view of mothers garden,
      Where roses, violets and pansies grew.

And over there in that shady corner,
            The swing beneath the old maple tree;
In this child's eyes it was so beautiful,
     I thought it would last forever and ever.

The flowers and garden have vanished now,
           How tender to this heart those scenes;
I recollect the walks in deep tangled woods,
     And a tranquil pond where swans glided.

Me and father walking hand in hand talking,
            And mother waiting on a picnic blanket;
Oh, with a quivering breath and a throbbing,
      I must leave this scene for they are dead.

I can only visit these far-off scenes of my life,
            When I am the child who dwells within;
And through her eyes, the eyes of little child,
      Can I go where I was so happy.

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August 30, 2015

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Jayasankar Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 1:57 AM
Another great poem with great imagery...though sad... with a cute picture... This must have been a wonderful contest by S1... "Through the eyes of a child".... enjoyed reading it Constance. Hugs.. ~ Ani
La France Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 8:36 AM
Ani, you picked another treasured poem of mine from 2015 to read, thank you for taking me here again, yes Silent One always had contests that I could dig deep into my soul for the words, I miss his contests and his visits to my poetry _Constance
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Very sentimental poem, BW. The feelings are universal however. You expressed those feelings in a very visual way. Excellent poem. Love you always. RW
Spagnola Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 2:51 PM
Wow! you are so blessed to have the ability to express a wonderful piece of mental jewelry that will last for most of your lifetime and now lives in your delicate imagery in verse...:), jill
Roper Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 Hugs Eve
Sietesantos Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Simply exquisite piece that fills me with nostalgia for my own childhood memories! Congratulations on a wonderful win, my friend! A-7! Pandita
A. Sharma Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 10:45 PM
Congrats Broken for a deserved big win with this very emotive sweet write so packed with memories!
Haight Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Lovely remembrances of your lovely childhood days, Broken. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 3:54 PM
A beautiful write Broken Wings many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Inman Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Sweet, lovely write, BW.
Van Breda Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 5:29 PM
This is so beautiful... it was like a fresh of breath air to read this innocent perceptions of a child's memories. Brilliant #7
Hunjeri Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Deep and warm. Beautiful memories to remember and to hold on too.
Tor Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 4:16 PM
Very nice. Memories of our past are priceless.
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