Notes About The Poem

Through the Breath of Divinity's Passing

Upon the majestic peak I stood
The wind against my face
It is there I felt
The breath of nature's passing.

Transfixed by presence
I journeyed into the mystery of the unknown
To find in the depths of tranquility
A revelation in my being.

A tree, a stream, a mountain peak
Revealing internal truth
And a calming state of consciousness
Through the breath of Divinity's passing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Smith Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 12:13 AM
This one brings back memories of my tramping days in seventies when there were some tracks that had only just been opened and you could go where few had trod before and look at views from angles no one had viewed them from before. Superb imagery with a touch of mystery. Best regards David in NZ
Stathakis Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 7:37 AM
Thank you David. All the best!
Koron Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 7:19 PM
Very Beautiful! Incredibly well written! Congratulations on your win! It is well deserved!
Stathakis Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:59 PM
Thank you Thomas. All the best.
Carber Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 9:16 AM
Congrats George--I especially like the last stanza.
Stathakis Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 7:30 PM
Thank you L. J. God bless.
Seeker Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 9:00 PM
Silence, calm, stillness ushering ‘breath of Divinity’s passing’ Beautiful! Congrats on your win, George!
Stathakis Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace