Through the Blurs
The scorching sun
Blazed on my neck
Causing me to wreck
The dust going up
In the air
Has let me notice an old snare
I don't know what happened
Will I ever?
Just these few moments
Has turned me around
Grazing in the distance
Is an old friend
That I never really knew that
Well
But then sadly she fell
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