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Through the Blurs

The scorching sun 
Blazed on my neck 
Causing me to wreck
The dust going up
In the air 
Has let me notice an old snare
I don't know what happened 
Will I ever?
Just these few moments 
Has turned me around 
Grazing in the distance 
Is an old friend 
That I never really knew that
Well
But then sadly she fell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/14/2015 10:58:00 AM
You have depicted humanity within it's ultimate vulnerability. Through our own fog's, we are left to carry a weight of life's experience's. Peace. :)
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