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Through My Eyes

Some think of me as waste of space - They cast a glance, then turn to face the screen. They watch the mighty mace bring down another one. Since when, oh ‘savvy’ human race, was killing sought for fun? ------------------------------------------------ I’ve seen them smile, I’ve seen them tear I rev their heartbeats as they near engrossing ends.. as what they fear does come, I have to beam - They know my folks they fight and dear - They are not what they seem! Some couldn’t care less - They fold and tear my pages, while others try and save for me their hard-earned daily wages… Burns Stanza

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Date: 5/20/2023 11:08:00 PM
nice uses of words
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Date: 7/14/2016 5:54:00 AM
Congrats Sneha! Very well written.
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Date: 7/14/2016 2:28:00 AM
Hi Sneha. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/12/2016 11:48:00 PM
Well done with your great win!
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Date: 7/12/2016 11:17:00 PM
Sneha, Congrats on your "Jaws Dropping win." Love SKAT*ace
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Date: 7/12/2016 7:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your top spot, Sneha. Very well written.
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Date: 7/12/2016 6:16:00 PM
Dropping back to say many many congrats on your top spot in the contest Sneha:-):-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/29/2016 4:33:00 AM
unusual take on the theme, best wishes for the contest - and thanks for passing by my work with your comments
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Date: 5/28/2016 11:56:00 AM
Very well written Sneha I love the ending - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/28/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thanks a lot, dear Jan!! :) :)
Date: 5/24/2016 6:54:00 PM
Amazing poem, Sneha...great jaw-dropper! Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/28/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Sandra!! Very glad you liked it.. :) :)
Date: 5/22/2016 10:26:00 PM
Definitely a jaw dropper, good luck in the contest:)
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Date: 5/28/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thanks a lot!! :) :)
Date: 5/20/2016 11:42:00 AM
okay, truly jaw -dropping verse.. i enjoyed this immensely, sneva..huggs
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Date: 5/28/2016 3:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Nette!! :) :)
Date: 5/18/2016 11:26:00 PM
Very creative and inspiring piece! :)
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Date: 5/28/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thank you!! :) :)
Date: 5/17/2016 8:51:00 PM
A very good poem for the contest and a great use of personification... Nicely penned, Sneha! I enjoyed this very much... Good luck to you!
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Sneha Rv
Date: 5/28/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thank you very much, dear Kelly!! Glad you liked it!! :)
Date: 5/15/2016 8:20:00 PM
hey, that was very clever. You put on your thinking cap for that one, dearie. Very nice. (loved the ending!)
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Sneha Rv
Date: 5/16/2016 1:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Andrea!! I'm so very glad you liked it!! :) :)
Date: 5/15/2016 3:14:00 PM
Well done, Sneha!! You keep bettering yourself! You're a clever young lady:) // paul
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Sneha Rv
Date: 5/16/2016 1:34:00 AM
Thank you so much for your motivation and support; very glad you liked it!! :) :)

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