Sneha Rv Poet Verse

Through My Eyes

Some think of me as waste of space -
They cast a glance, then turn to face
the screen. They watch the mighty mace
bring down another one.
Since when, oh ‘savvy’ human race,
was killing sought for fun?

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I’ve seen them smile, I’ve seen them tear
I rev their heartbeats as they near
engrossing ends.. as what they fear
does come, I have to beam -
They know my folks they fight and dear -
They are not what they seem!
 


  Some couldn’t care less - They fold and tear my pages,
     while others try and save for me their hard-earned daily wages…




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Radhika Archana May 20, 2023 at 11:08 PM nice uses of words

Nandita Das July 14, 2016 at 5:54 AM Congrats Sneha! Very well written.

Teddy Kimathi July 14, 2016 at 2:28 AM Hi Sneha. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)

Just James July 12, 2016 at 11:48 PM Well done with your great win!

Skat A July 12, 2016 at 11:17 PM Sneha, Congrats on your "Jaws Dropping win." Love SKAT*ace

Karam Misra July 12, 2016 at 7:53 PM Congratulations on your top spot, Sneha. Very well written.

Jan Allison July 12, 2016 at 6:16 PM Dropping back to say many many congrats on your top spot in the contest Sneha:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot May 29, 2016 at 4:33 AM unusual take on the theme, best wishes for the contest - and thanks for passing by my work with your comments

Jan Allison May 28, 2016 at 11:56 AM Very well written Sneha I love the ending - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Sneha Rv May 28, 2016 at 3:13 PM Thanks a lot, dear Jan!! :) :)

Sandra Haight May 24, 2016 at 6:54 PM Amazing poem, Sneha...great jaw-dropper! Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra Sneha Rv May 28, 2016 at 3:14 PM Thank you so much, dear Sandra!! Very glad you liked it.. :) :)

Royal Ninja May 22, 2016 at 10:26 PM Definitely a jaw dropper, good luck in the contest:) Sneha Rv May 28, 2016 at 3:14 PM Thanks a lot!! :) :)

Nette Onclaud May 20, 2016 at 11:42 AM okay, truly jaw -dropping verse.. i enjoyed this immensely, sneva..huggs Sneha Rv May 28, 2016 at 3:15 PM Thank you so much, dear Nette!! :) :)

Arthur Vaso May 18, 2016 at 11:26 PM Very creative and inspiring piece! :) Sneha Rv May 28, 2016 at 3:14 PM Thank you!! :) :)

Kelly Deschler May 17, 2016 at 8:51 PM A very good poem for the contest and a great use of personification... Nicely penned, Sneha! I enjoyed this very much... Good luck to you! Sneha Rv May 28, 2016 at 3:13 PM Thank you very much, dear Kelly!! Glad you liked it!! :)

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2016 at 8:20 PM hey, that was very clever. You put on your thinking cap for that one, dearie. Very nice. (loved the ending!) Sneha Rv May 16, 2016 at 1:33 AM Thank you so much, dear Andrea!! I'm so very glad you liked it!! :) :)

Paul Callus May 15, 2016 at 3:14 PM Well done, Sneha!! You keep bettering yourself! You're a clever young lady:) // paul Sneha Rv May 16, 2016 at 1:34 AM Thank you so much for your motivation and support; very glad you liked it!! :) :)