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Through My Eyes

Eyes
                                             Lengthy eyelashes
                                   Diamond      tears      catch the light
                             Beautiful         blue-green     irises penetrate
                         Black pupils       that deeply      reflect everything
                               Startling even      the      most attentive
                                        Searching the barren lands
                                              Piercing the dark
                                                       Eyes
                                                                         and
                                                                         the
                                                                        tears 
                                                                        freely 
                                                                         fall 
                                                                         on

Copyright © Kesha Mashaw | Year Posted 2009

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Audrey Haick Date: 12/4/2009 12:03:00 PM Awesome! Keep on writing! You've got talent, dear! Thanks for sharing! Peace and love, Audrey Login to Reply

Derrick Burton Date: 6/3/2009 9:34:00 AM beautiful.... Login to Reply

Abe Lopez Date: 4/14/2009 10:36:00 AM I love the shape you have created for this write! good job.... Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 4/9/2009 7:55:00 PM Kesha, congratulations on being featured this week. Always, Daneann Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 4/8/2009 8:28:00 PM Kesha - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj Login to Reply

Tyesha Ehigiator Date: 4/6/2009 4:51:00 PM Love the Creative shape...Great write, Congrats on being featured this week. GB Always, Tyesha Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 4/6/2009 1:26:00 PM Awesome feature Kesha! Congratulations! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Brandee Augustus Date: 4/6/2009 1:21:00 PM I think this is a shape poem. Very nice! Login to Reply

Lena Townsend Date: 4/6/2009 1:00:00 PM Nice shape poem. Congratulations on being featured this week! Smiles from Lolita Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 4/6/2009 12:07:00 PM Nice shape and congrats on being featured this week...Raul Login to Reply

Date: 4/6/2009 11:56:00 AM The shape of this poem is so artistic and really helps convey your thoughts in a creative way. Nice use of alltieration. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen Login to Reply

Trudy Diane Rider Date: 4/6/2009 7:31:00 AM This is a wonderful shape poem! Very well done! Congratulations on being featured this week! ~Trudy Login to Reply

Brenden Taylor Date: 4/6/2009 6:33:00 AM This would be called a Shape poem, for future reference. Also, you misspelled "catch" at the beginning and "freely" toward the end. It's a great poem, and I love the imagery you create with the line "diamond tears." Good work, and I can't wait to read more! Best always, Brenden Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/6/2009 5:58:00 AM Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Laurie Ginn Date: 4/6/2009 4:00:00 AM Great poem to feature, I like almost any poem where the writer also takes the artistic flair with the shape. Very original. Login to Reply

Ernilando Tugaff Date: 4/6/2009 3:49:00 AM Kesha, very nice. Short but meaningful. Congratulations on your featured poem this week. Ernilando Login to Reply

Kody Oberhauser Date: 4/1/2009 6:08:00 PM thats awsome... Login to Reply