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Through My Eyes

Eyes Lengthy eyelashes Diamond tears catch the light Beautiful blue-green irises penetrate Black pupils that deeply reflect everything Startling even the most attentive Searching the barren lands Piercing the dark Eyes and the tears freely fall on

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Audrey Haick

Date: 12/4/2009 12:03:00 PM

Awesome! Keep on writing! You've got talent, dear! Thanks for sharing! Peace and love, Audrey

Derrick Burton

Date: 6/3/2009 9:34:00 AM

beautiful....

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/14/2009 10:36:00 AM

I love the shape you have created for this write! good job....

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/9/2009 7:55:00 PM

Kesha, congratulations on being featured this week. Always, Daneann

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/8/2009 8:28:00 PM

Kesha - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 4/6/2009 4:51:00 PM

Love the Creative shape...Great write, Congrats on being featured this week. GB Always, Tyesha

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/6/2009 1:26:00 PM

Awesome feature Kesha! Congratulations! Love, Shar

Brandee Augustus

Date: 4/6/2009 1:21:00 PM

I think this is a shape poem. Very nice!

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/6/2009 1:00:00 PM

Nice shape poem. Congratulations on being featured this week! Smiles from Lolita

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/6/2009 12:07:00 PM

Nice shape and congrats on being featured this week...Raul

Date: 4/6/2009 11:56:00 AM

The shape of this poem is so artistic and really helps convey your thoughts in a creative way. Nice use of alltieration. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/6/2009 7:31:00 AM

This is a wonderful shape poem! Very well done! Congratulations on being featured this week! ~Trudy

Brenden Taylor

Date: 4/6/2009 6:33:00 AM

This would be called a Shape poem, for future reference. Also, you misspelled "catch" at the beginning and "freely" toward the end. It's a great poem, and I love the imagery you create with the line "diamond tears." Good work, and I can't wait to read more! Best always, Brenden

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/6/2009 5:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/6/2009 4:00:00 AM

Great poem to feature, I like almost any poem where the writer also takes the artistic flair with the shape. Very original.

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/6/2009 3:49:00 AM

Kesha, very nice. Short but meaningful. Congratulations on your featured poem this week. Ernilando

Kody Oberhauser

Date: 4/1/2009 6:08:00 PM

thats awsome...