Through My Eyes

do you ever wonder what your life looks like

through someone Else's eyes
 
in case you were wondering,

you are like a sunset to me.

you're all kinds of beautiful

as you end my day, and

you sweetly retire as

the stars chase you away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 11:38 PM
Aww, lovely poem - James
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 4:10 AM
Lovely images! A sweet piece so tenderly written... Well done Elizabeth! Best wishes, Keith
Ginn Avatar
January 14, 2009 at 1:41 PM
I love the phrase,,"you're all kinds of beautiful" its so endearing. Laurie
Haniff Avatar
January 14, 2009 at 9:14 AM
sweet poem....*Maryam
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 14, 2009 at 4:53 AM
That was sweet. Nicely written. Vince
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