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Through My Eyes

do you ever wonder what your life looks like through someone Else's eyes in case you were wondering, you are like a sunset to me. you're all kinds of beautiful as you end my day, and you sweetly retire as the stars chase you away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/16/2009 11:38:00 PM
Aww, lovely poem - James
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:10:00 AM
Lovely images! A sweet piece so tenderly written... Well done Elizabeth! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/14/2009 1:41:00 PM
I love the phrase,,"you're all kinds of beautiful" its so endearing. Laurie
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Date: 1/14/2009 9:14:00 AM
sweet poem....*Maryam
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Date: 1/14/2009 4:53:00 AM
That was sweet. Nicely written. Vince
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