Notes About The Poem

Through My Eyes

Oh,  I wish you'd realize just how precious
      a treasure you are!  I'm sure you've known some
              blind to your true worth; there are some...

   that think you bronze. You might think yourself silver,
      or gold, but if only you could see yourself through 
my eyes, you'd see what I see, a sparkling diamond,  baby!


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Date written: 05/25/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Miller Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations, a sparkling write.
Ibeh Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Thank you so much, Terry:-)
Merryman Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 7:14 PM
A wonderful, heart-felt affirmation of worth! Congrats on your win, Edward! Blessings, Kim M
Ibeh Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 2:37 AM
Thank you so much, Kim:-)
Mitra Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 6:17 PM
Any woman especially your love would love to hear these words, Congrats on your win Edward....much love :)
Ibeh Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 7:37 PM
Thank you for the congrats and visit, Carol:-)
Kauffman Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 11:02 AM
What a beautiful love song Edward! The love of your life is truly blessed by your love that lifts her up! Congratulations on your win. This is a gem - no pun intended! A treasury of blessings to you!
Ibeh Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 11:09 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback, Sam:-) Most appreciated.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and rose. Thanks for adding Proverbs 31:10. Have a blessed day............
Ibeh Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 9:53 AM
Thanks for the congrats, Paula:-) You have a blessed day as well!
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 8:33 AM
so sweet this is. Congrats for your win! well deserved.
Ibeh Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-) Most appreciated.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 8:33 PM
The poem sparkles like a diamond, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 6:12 AM
Thank you so much, Subimal:-)
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