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Through My Eyes

Through my eyes… You are the sunset over a beautiful summer’s ocean. Your colorful show leaves me breathless As I lie down to watch you move, Watch you stretch your arms across the horizon Draping the wondering clouds In a masterful orange and purple organza. And I see them strut across their makeshift ramp Showing off their new clothes To the rapture of the waves below. What a show your presence creates Through my eyes…

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Date: 11/30/2008 4:49:00 AM
Pravir - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:08:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:58:00 PM
Pravir - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/1/2008 3:51:00 PM
Beautiful write here Pravir ... I almost feel like I'm watching a fashion show and then again, its Mother Nature at her finest ... smile ... this is a very well-deserved selection to be featured this week! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/1/2008 8:15:00 AM
Pravir, Congratulations for being featured here as I commend you for a nicely done poem. I enjoyed the soft touches of nature included. Wonderful Poem... MPK
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Date: 10/31/2008 12:09:00 PM
Pravir, Heartiest congratulations on your poem Through My Eyes being featured this week. It is a beautiful write. You have used your pen as a paint brush to capture the grace and beauty of an enchanting sunset. Keep writing. -Mohammad
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Date: 10/30/2008 4:49:00 PM
Pravir congrats on having your poetry featured this week and for making it through the first round - God Bless
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Date: 10/29/2008 12:52:00 PM
This is a lovely poem to be featured this week! Congratulations!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/28/2008 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2008 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations Pravir on "Through My Eyes" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 10/27/2008 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 12:38:00 AM
Awesome love poem. With vivid imagery and sensual wordings. Very well penned. Congratulations on being featured! Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/26/2008 5:09:00 PM
The beauty of this poem has me smiling. Congratulations on having it featured. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/26/2008 3:37:00 PM
Breathtaking poetry! Congratulations on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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