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Through Her Eyes

Through locked eyes, I became frozen.
Eyes of love buried under internalized pain.
Pain that crystallized her soul to ice.
I relished to ignite it.


m.n.i.w
Through Your Eyes
6/11/2015
Visual 4
25 words

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Andrea Dietrich June 23, 2015 at 9:30 PM a great poem using the same picture I liked so much too. Congrats!!

Skat A June 22, 2015 at 4:41 PM wow,,,, awesome. Congrats

Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2015 at 3:47 PM nice win

Shadow Hamilton June 22, 2015 at 2:58 AM congrats on placing m.n.i.w hugs

Francine Roberts June 21, 2015 at 9:13 PM nice imagery, many congrats on your win

Jan Allison June 21, 2015 at 3:33 PM beautiful deep imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser June 13, 2015 at 12:50 AM Very well written! I liked your imagery in this poem. Good luck in the contest:) M.N.I.W M.N.I.W June 13, 2015 at 1:11 AM Thank you. Appreciate the comment