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Through Her Eyes

Through locked eyes, I became frozen. Eyes of love buried under internalized pain. Pain that crystallized her soul to ice. I relished to ignite it.
m.n.i.w Through Your Eyes 6/11/2015 Visual 4 25 words

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Date: 6/23/2015 9:30:00 PM
a great poem using the same picture I liked so much too. Congrats!!
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Date: 6/22/2015 4:41:00 PM
wow,,,, awesome. Congrats
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Date: 6/22/2015 3:47:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 6/22/2015 2:58:00 AM
congrats on placing m.n.i.w hugs
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Date: 6/21/2015 9:13:00 PM
nice imagery, many congrats on your win
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Date: 6/21/2015 3:33:00 PM
beautiful deep imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/13/2015 12:50:00 AM
Very well written! I liked your imagery in this poem. Good luck in the contest:)
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Date: 6/13/2015 1:11:00 AM
Thank you. Appreciate the comment

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