Through Cold Rain

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beautiful.quenalbertini: I see rain through the window.. and I ...

While lamp post streaks on floor, darkness pervades just as nightfall dims… He tucks warm arms around mine through rain, cold. Brian's Select G

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/2/2020 8:02:00 PM

'Vintage nette onclaud:' Dramatic imagery, understated elegance. Great write, nette! Cheers, Gershon

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/2/2020 5:06:00 PM

Lovely, romantic piece, Nette. Janice

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/2/2020 4:32:00 AM

A romantic Ninette, keeping them warm inspite of cold. Best. Mohan

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/2/2020 12:29:00 AM

This is beautiful Nette, wrapping up in the warmth of your words. Best wishes :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/1/2020 9:48:00 PM

Beautiful romantic Ninette, Nette, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/1/2020 5:39:00 PM

Love the romantic image Nette, it's a lovely form you've created. Tom

Silent One

Date: 6/1/2020 10:54:00 AM

A great ninette by nette... always know how to create imagery..