throng wants Chrissie out of the Chorus

Chrissie the angel had a hesitant song
every note out of her mouth was pretty much wrong
but she had been initiated into God’s chorus throng
so she did her best, but it was not long…..

The other members demanded God take her back out
They were vocal about it, some of them said this in a shout
God was not pleased they thought He had made a mistake
But He put her in charge of frosting a large wedding cake

The cake was a hit, Chrissie was great at food
She created other items too, putting God into a terrific mood
He took credit for years, pretending that He had known best
But I knew better, and so did all of the rest.
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