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Throb of Bliss Scintillating

I write upon my soul, imprinting my desire, birthing thereby, karmic cause and effect; this truth veiled, during earth visit, due ego delusion, manifest as belief of my separateness, leading to cyclic joy and suffering. In silence and stillness, consciousness discerning underlying cause of stuporousness, as my thought borne agitation, of habits that persist. No sooner my flaw within, I did so detect, consigned ego to the funeral pyre. Thought rested, ego faded, heart was yet afire, love enabled, divine aligned, stance erect, transcending lower mind limit, in void of cessation, myself abiding in self-aware awareness, ensconced by throb of bliss scintillating. 28-January-2021
My Invented Form - I Write Upon Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Syllables 12/10/8/6/12/10 format: abcdef fedcba abcdef Poem beginning with ‘I write upon ...’ Syllable, grammar check - PS (word ‘stuporousness’ verified https://en.m.wiktionary.org/wiki/stuporousness)

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Date: 2/16/2021 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Enjoy your win with blessings....................
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Date: 2/16/2021 7:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paula! :)
Date: 2/15/2021 10:09:00 AM
Hi Seeker, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
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Date: 2/15/2021 7:17:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis! :)
Date: 2/15/2021 9:19:00 AM
Seeker, congratulations on your win in my contest, I Write Upon, using my Invented Form, your poem is wonderful _Constance
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:35:00 AM
Thanks for the appreciation, Constance! :)
Date: 1/28/2021 9:20:00 AM
Great job with the invented form of Dear Heart's. She always is so inspiring. Great imagery here.
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Date: 1/28/2021 6:13:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! Yes, it’s fun trying out new formats, isn’t it?

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