Thriving

Waking up on broken glass, dirty clothes, and forgotten thought,
your mind has come back from synthetic bliss and is thriving comfort.
Without no will, your body moves to find someone who sells peace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 12:54 AM
Very nicely done. Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. I've awaken this morning to the dirty clothes and task to be done. Sara
Brown Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 5:15 PM
Good afternoon Jessica. Thank you for sharing your fantastic poetry today. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 12:00 PM
Sounds like a good poem, about a bad thing, good write, blessing Moses
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