Thrive In the Dark

you know he'll work best in the dark room
ran on the scent of rotten angels he kept 
let him loose in the living room
and hes wrapped around the furniture
look him in the windowless eye
sunk down to his elbows
he got me on my lucky thirteens

burnt out easy
a good mix of glow and gloom
that which strives when most deprived
who thrives in the darkest part of a room

used to lie in the backyard
be glowing for days
a come down like sunset
be spewin light and it would
wrap around the buildings
and the houses looked human
with monsters within

night didnt need a camouflage
you could see right through
that which cries when most alive
who thrives in the darkest time of night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 7:18 AM
Fantastic metaphor. Welcome to the soup. Drop by me anytime, you are welcome as my friend.
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 11:33 AM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Alias it was very different. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 5:50 AM
creepy subject... the freaks come out at night?
Bagnall Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Interesting, not sure I quite get it, but it conjours up some scary images ! enjoyed reading you poem
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