Linda-Marie Sweetheart Poet Rispetto

Thriller

   "Thriller"




upon eerie coverlet of faint moonlight
midnight creeps to touch tombstones of cursed undead
haunting entities delight in spooking night
zombies open coffins to ravish with dread

feasting upon flesh and bone in vampy style
tasting blood from jugular...victim defile

staring motionless submissive to witch chant
enticed by love ... death charms innocence to pant.

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Skat A March 13, 2014 at 3:10 AM wow, so exciting... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Harry Horsman October 19, 2012 at 3:18 PM wow a scary poem Sweetheart, and an excellent one too...

Ravindra K Kapoor October 18, 2012 at 6:43 AM Sorry Linda. My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra

Ravindra K Kapoor October 17, 2012 at 8:25 PM It’s a traffics sketch of a scary night. Perhaps more scary than a video projection. A superb write in your thriller series. The poem not only reconfirms the skills of your great pen but also the vastness of your writing height and depths and thank you once again for your precious words on my new Poem. It was a joy to read such beautiful words. Love and best wishes always my friend. ..Ravindra...SH Linda Marie B

Len Gasun October 17, 2012 at 10:01 AM Wow!! It's a very wonderful scary poem you've penned my dear Linda. I love it especially the ending! I wish you good luck for your grand win my dear friend. Thank you for sharing and for all your congratulatory comments. I've just arrived from a week camp and so tired. So, i'll come back tomorrow to read your poems and other poems I've missed. Good night and I wish you all the best! Love, Leonora

James Marshall Goff October 17, 2012 at 5:22 AM very cool poem, Linda! soupmail...jimbo

Nicole King October 16, 2012 at 5:54 PM Very wonderful vampire poem.

Russell Sivey October 16, 2012 at 4:06 PM This is beautiful Linda-Marie! I really love this incredibly designed and well manicured frightful piece! This is so fabulous, I am in awe with delight my friend! I'm glad to see others participate in Halloween festivities, What a phenomenal job, Great Work!!

David Williams October 16, 2012 at 3:37 PM Linda-Marie spooky take on a great video..David

Poet Destroyer A October 16, 2012 at 3:16 PM Linda, my sweet bff... love the thriller ,,, almost like the video... enjoyed...pd

Polly Plafcan October 16, 2012 at 2:52 PM Ooooh! The season is right for this type write. Enjoyed it and puts me in the spirit. Write on....Polly

Sara Kendrick October 16, 2012 at 2:35 PM If for a contest, reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading your work..Only 15 more days to Halloween..So little time left to write those scary works..Sara Sara Kendrick October 16, 2012 at 2:36 PM Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the review of my work.Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 16, 2012 at 2:10 PM JUST FOR HALLOWEEN FUN ... OR SCARES .. BASED ON THRILLER MUSIC VIDEO POETS .. ENJOY .. BBOOOBBOOOBBOOO