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Thriller

"Thriller" upon eerie coverlet of faint moonlight midnight creeps to touch tombstones of cursed undead haunting entities delight in spooking night zombies open coffins to ravish with dread feasting upon flesh and bone in vampy style tasting blood from jugular...victim defile staring motionless submissive to witch chant enticed by love ... death charms innocence to pant.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/13/2014 3:10:00 AM
wow, so exciting... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/19/2012 3:18:00 PM
wow a scary poem Sweetheart, and an excellent one too...
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Date: 10/18/2012 6:43:00 AM
Sorry Linda. My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra
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Date: 10/17/2012 8:25:00 PM
It’s a traffics sketch of a scary night. Perhaps more scary than a video projection. A superb write in your thriller series. The poem not only reconfirms the skills of your great pen but also the vastness of your writing height and depths and thank you once again for your precious words on my new Poem. It was a joy to read such beautiful words. Love and best wishes always my friend. ..Ravindra...SH Linda Marie B
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Date: 10/17/2012 10:01:00 AM
Wow!! It's a very wonderful scary poem you've penned my dear Linda. I love it especially the ending! I wish you good luck for your grand win my dear friend. Thank you for sharing and for all your congratulatory comments. I've just arrived from a week camp and so tired. So, i'll come back tomorrow to read your poems and other poems I've missed. Good night and I wish you all the best! Love, Leonora
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Date: 10/17/2012 5:22:00 AM
very cool poem, Linda! soupmail...jimbo
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Date: 10/16/2012 5:54:00 PM
Very wonderful vampire poem.
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Date: 10/16/2012 4:06:00 PM
This is beautiful Linda-Marie! I really love this incredibly designed and well manicured frightful piece! This is so fabulous, I am in awe with delight my friend! I'm glad to see others participate in Halloween festivities, What a phenomenal job, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/16/2012 3:37:00 PM
Linda-Marie spooky take on a great video..David
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Date: 10/16/2012 3:16:00 PM
Linda, my sweet bff... love the thriller ,,, almost like the video... enjoyed...pd
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Date: 10/16/2012 2:52:00 PM
Ooooh! The season is right for this type write. Enjoyed it and puts me in the spirit. Write on....Polly
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Date: 10/16/2012 2:35:00 PM
If for a contest, reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading your work..Only 15 more days to Halloween..So little time left to write those scary works..Sara
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Date: 10/16/2012 2:36:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the review of my work.Sara
Date: 10/16/2012 2:10:00 PM
JUST FOR HALLOWEEN FUN ... OR SCARES .. BASED ON THRILLER MUSIC VIDEO POETS .. ENJOY .. BBOOOBBOOOBBOOO
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