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Thrill of Rain

smells like rain can’t complain time to run let’s have fun drizzles fall hours enthrall bare our toes puddle flows we both hop till knees drop ~ rolls the dance sweet romance chilly air windblown hair -) moon appears showers clear lips on lips my heart flips kisses wet love’s roulette tunes are played serenade ~ his breaths pound round and round words in threes he says..'please' starry-eyed 'be my bride' ~*~ skies beguile all’s worthwhile hands a-swing next...my ring! each other twogether Threes, Please Contest, for Beth Evans 9/17/2020
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Mcintosh Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Awww.. this is adorable and so rich with vivid imagery - I love it. God bless you dear lady, with all that your heart desires and more. Love and prayers sent your way, Gina
Brul Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 9:47 PM
Spellbinding piece! The clarity and crisp image conveyed in each line....ahhhh so beautifully crafted! You are a great artist Ms Nette!!! A fave!!Congratulations!
Dutta Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 9:30 PM
Big congrats to win top. Love.
Kauffman Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Back with congratulations Nette. Have always loved the rain being from the northwest. You really did capture a rainy experience!
Kauffman Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 9:21 PM
Back with congratulations Nette. Have always loved the rain being from the northwest. You really did capture a rainy experience!
Roper Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 8:16 PM
Hey , hey, "lips on lips my heart flips"; Nette, 1st place :) congratulations on your win girl. Hugs eve
Fowler Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 6:42 PM
Congratulations on your placement nette! Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 3:41 PM
Beautifully romantic, Nette! Love: kisses wet love’s roulette
Turner Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 5:32 PM
Sounds like a fun date except for the marrying part. Nicely penned, nette. Always classy. Haven't seen you in a while. Life treating you OK? Hoping you and yours are well.
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 3:57 PM
You created a wonderful romantic scene in just a few words, Nette. A winning poem for sure.
Kauffman Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 3:39 PM
A special dance of romance in sparkling images - from rain to moonlight and a life beyond. I love this one Nette! Best of wishes for the contest!
Sands Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 2:44 PM
This is such a fun poem. So special Nette. Well done :)
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